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:icondeadmanjay631:
lets get started
i don't know were to start, i love the shading and the style of colours it looks amazing
i like the activity in the scene, Lyra (pretty sure that's her) looks really good, very shiny and very active
BonBon looks really cute and very surprised like Lyra fell from the roof and looks extremely cute
i love the pose they are in, i really like the flanks, eyes, front legs and back (i find them hard to draw)
i think maybe a background would be good but they are really a prick to draw and quite hard
maybe a little fluffiness in the ears or across the legs but it still looks amazing
well i think that's it for this critique :typerhappy: thanks for reading :squee:
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Critique by lydiasarrow43 Jun 17, 2013, 1:20:30 PM
to my vision i see lyra the human lover bon bon the lovable
i see that it is a wondeful pianting i see how the legs bend
and how the body is posed like to puppys getting ready to pounce
i like how you can still see the out lines and how thick they
are and the shadeing is AMAZING and how the go bon bons
mane right! how the colors are correct and how the connected
the out lines its amazing this is how MLP should be how its
more something that has a better shading and quality i love it!
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:iconvalenmosquera:
ValenMosquera Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Whats the name of this ship?
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:iconbritishstarr:
BritishStarr Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Filmographer
Lyrabon
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:iconmoppypuppy:
MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
YOU BON BON.




Nailed it.
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:icongod2000zilla:
god2000zilla Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
HANDS
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:iconppgallthetime20:
ppgallthetime20 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
nevermind got confused there Well this is embarassing...
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:iconppgallthetime20:
ppgallthetime20 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
is that really sweetie belle's cutie mark?
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:iconangelicapony:
angelicaPony Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
O_O
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:iconmirceakitsune:
MirceaKitsune Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
So very sweet! <3
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:iconkiraaplushies:
KiraaPlushies Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Can we have higher resolution, to use as a wallpaper?
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:iconcaballero-nocturno:
caballero-nocturno Featured By Owner May 24, 2013
hahaha very cool xD
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:iconangelofrombelow:
angelofrombelow Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
I have no idea what happened next. The possibilities are endless.
Bon Bon probably ran off scared.
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:iconkatarjin:
katarjin Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
YOUR SOUL!
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:iconbritishstarr:
BritishStarr Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Student Filmographer
Hahaha, I imagined Lyra saying that.
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:iconshorjok:
Shorjok Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So very cute. Love it.
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:iconroninjedi:
roninjedi Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Professional General Artist
*boop!* "YER IT!" (and Lyra runs)
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:iconkomatsuzaki-xingqi:
Komatsuzaki-Xingqi Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Headcanon accepted. :iconpinkieismindfckedplz:
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:iconpip-pip-rah:
pip-pip-rah Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
Oh gosh I didn't like these two being paired up at first but now I can't imagine anything else.
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:iconanti-mlpony:
anti-mlpony Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
SO ADORABLE :iconwhywubwooplz:
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:iconsamcybercat:
SamCyberCat Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
They're going to kill me with cuteness~!
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:icontoontwins:
ToonTwins Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Super cute! :happybounce:
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:iconmrboltzmann:
MrBoltzmann Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have beautiful eyes. Can I touch them?
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:iconkomatsuzaki-xingqi:
Komatsuzaki-Xingqi Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I found you!
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:iconharper77:
Harper77 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student
3....2....1.....POUNCE!

This is adorable!
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:icondreamingnoctis:
dreamingnoctis Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
I really love the linework on this. The thick border makes it pop, and the overall boldness of the rest of the lines is great. It makes them seem very lively and tangible. the expressions are just adorable as well.
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:iconjunglepony:
JunglePony Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thick lines makes this drawing special in this fandom.
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:icondragonstar1278:
Dragonstar1278 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
Cute!
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:iconironlenny:
Ironlenny Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
"What do you want?"

"Rape!"
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:iconrainbowraindashdash:
RainbowRainDashDash Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
Not... sure... if... ponies... or... cats...
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:iconshadow-sketch:
Shadow-Sketch Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconnotsureifplz:
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:icongiromcalica:
GiromCalica Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
We need more pony nuzzles
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:iconzeno0192:
zeno0192 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
they're so cute
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:iconojhat:
OJhat Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww... i wanna play with Lyra! She looks like a playful cat with her tail high in the air like that.
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:iconsimeonleonard:
SimeonLeonard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She wants her face :D
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:iconmadrigles:
madrigles Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
She wants to play! How cute!
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:iconbotchan-mlp:
Botchan-MLP Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very cute :)
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:iconnorthwestcore:
Northwestcore Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute. :D
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:iconnoroxia:
noroxia Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
I want play jejejejej
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