lets get started i don't know were to start, i love the shading and the style of colours it looks amazing i like the activity in the scene, Lyra (pretty sure that's her) looks really good, very shiny and very active BonBon looks really cute and very surprised like Lyra fell from the roof and looks extremely cute i love the pose they are in, i really like the flanks, eyes, front legs and back (i find them hard to draw) i think maybe a background would be good but they are really a prick to draw and quite hard maybe a little fluffiness in the ears or across the legs but it still looks amazing well i think that's it for this critique thanks for reading
to my vision i see lyra the human lover bon bon the lovable i see that it is a wondeful pianting i see how the legs bend and how the body is posed like to puppys getting ready to pounce i like how you can still see the out lines and how thick they are and the shadeing is AMAZING and how the go bon bons mane right! how the colors are correct and how the connected the out lines its amazing this is how MLP should be how its more something that has a better shading and quality i love it!
I really love the linework on this. The thick border makes it pop, and the overall boldness of the rest of the lines is great. It makes them seem very lively and tangible. the expressions are just adorable as well.