I'm definitely enjoying this sight gag. You clearly used your own art style for the character - which explains why I give you 4 stars for originality. I also applaud your originality by taking the character's personality traits and expanding on them in a new way. Given the character's habits, I can definitely see this happening (granted it were real). Your drawing techniques look pretty good. You have good attention to detail, including the nose clip. I like the subtle things in artwork. I give you 5 stars on impact because I get the message. This is clearly a deliberate (and quite funny) sight gag that pokes at Twilight's obsessive compulsive nature. This makes the piece of art all the more believable. Excellent work.