Having a look at the picture itself, the proportions are great, with the exception of the horn vs the head.
the tail seems a little too drawn out, but the artwork given to the overall mane and tail are very well done, it's definately been created instead of overlayed from an image.
the hooves are the same as one original with a nice touch.
the body does seem a little short, but seems fair given the angle luna seems to be from the 'frame'
the only improvements i could suggest would be to try dithering the mane/tail with a highlight from the main body to make it appear more 'attached' to the body
the tail seems a little too drawn out, but the artwork given to the overall mane and tail are very well done, it's definately been created instead of overlayed from an image.
the hooves are the same as one original with a nice touch.
the body does seem a little short, but seems fair given the angle luna seems
to be from the 'frame'
the only improvements i could suggest would be to try dithering the mane/tail with a highlight from the main body to make it appear more 'attached' to the body
all in all a nice representation, good work
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