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...Defects and damage are also very important microstructural features and are typically dependent on process conditions and history. Process maps that incorporate process criteria and a mapping of defects and damage in terms of process parameters are useful tools. These criteria can be combined with simulation output (i.e., distributions of material conditions of stress, strain, and temperature) to identify conditions corresponding to formation of defects or damage.
The next chapter is on thermal composites, but we should probably stop for the night.
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-Twilights horn is a little to low on her head. If she were sitting more upward then it would be between her eyes.
-Celestia's magic look really pretty, but it fades into the background light from the lamp. Maybe have it a bit more defined?
Other then that, I love everything else about this piece. The anatomy is correct and realistic (even for spike) and it looks good overall.
A couple things I might recommend: 1. I might not use an overlay effect for Celestia's magic. The way it blends with the lighting just make the book look like it's kinda floating in midair.
2. Something about Spike's shape seems a little off. He looks more like a cat than a baby dragon, and I think the show portrays him to be a little chubbier.
However it seems to me, you had a very clear idea in your head of how you wanted this to look, and it seems like you took a lot of time and effort to work on this, and this is a beautiful, adorable piece. I particularly love the vibrant colors.
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