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February 25, 2013
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Cosplayin' time. by BritishStarr Cosplayin' time. by BritishStarr
Fluttershy as Trixie.
Some background objects were taken from a FREE WALLPAPER SITE.

I ALREADY POSTED IT ON TUMBLR! Don't repost it on tumblr please!
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I applaud the effort you put in to this drawing, and I have nothing but praise but I like to start with the negative aspects before going to positive ones.

The bad:
When I looked at Fluttershy's tail where it met the cloak it felt like the cloak was part of the tail almost like a tangent of some sort. I would try maybe having the corner of that cloak on that side stick out a bit. That way a disconnection between both objects are more clearly defined.

Just one bad thing thing, I almost mistook her right shoulder as being almost 2x longer than her left but looking it over again it could be just because of how her right leg is posed so it decided to over look it.

The good:
The context is cute and the expression Fluttershy has is very good. It shows that she feels out of her element and is embarrassed about it. The shading is well done aside form maybe where the tail meets the cloak in the lower right quadrant. and and the softness of the overall image makes it very easy on the eyes.

Keep up the good work. I'm not one of the best art critics in fact I am still learning how after a couple years but I do know how helpful it is to at least get an honest attempt at critiquing on DA. :)
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The Great and Powerful Futtershy! She looks so pretty in Trixie's cape and hat!!! :heart: :love: :heart:
DoughnutJoe Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
Oh the adorableness! Fluttershy is the worst Trixie. :)
Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
How adorable.
Def-Initely Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
LordDivinity Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconchuuplz: -Dies from adorable overload- :iconchuuplz:
There are no. words.
NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This one is so cute <3 Fluttershy looks so awesome here ^^
timfortune9 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Get Trixie and Fluttershy together and try Star Swirl's original spell again.
opus-13 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
This is really cute! Fluttershy would make such an awful Trixie. I think that contributes to how cute the picture is though. Lovely pose, expression, and colors! :D
HungrySohma16 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
She has no idea what to do! hehe x3
Arxuicy Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nicely done but yeah ,, the shoulder is a bit disturbing :/ ( but your still worth a lama )!
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