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Coal Pencil. by BritishStarr Coal Pencil. by BritishStarr
A friend's OC.
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where do i begin... this is the best drawing i have ever seen. i know! it is a pony (i am a big brony)! he has a jacket! and he has the same colored hair as my OC, and he has a cigarette! awesome! this is just one of your best works, i love it... it is just awesome... now to use the rest of the words... se ge g ag ge ger gdr g fg dfg f gsdf gsdf g sf gs gas g fg sg df gd g df df g fg fg sdf g eg efger g
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This piece is breathtaking. I love the shading and how you really illuminated the cigarette. The eyes are also wonderfully done, and I personally adore his expression. The mane and coat shading is done properly, which I also admire, and you made his structure look perfect. The shading is in the correct places, (instead of all over the place like some people do) and I honestly thing your style is absolutely wonderful. I like how you added fur to interpret how ponies do in fact have fur (though they dont show it on TV) and all in all, I can say that this is a wonderfully done piece. Good job.
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xXBLITZyXx Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
smoking is harmful
BritishStarr Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015  Student Filmographer
flutterbrony16 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
amazingly cute!
Komonoto Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sir that is not a pencil.
quilzel Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Stop making everything so cute! X.X (my reaction right here [link] I want to try and review it somehow to help you out, but I am not an artist. I just know what I think looks good, and let me tell you, this thing looks good. The only thing I could possibly think of (after staring at it for a little while), and this is more of personal taste, is to not use white lines for highlights. To me it makes the surface seem wet or highly polished. In the mane it looks alright, but IMHO it just kind of seems off on the his (cute little) cheeks and ears. Maybe a lighter grey instead of the white?
Magicrainbowbopperz Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow!,that is F[Buy some apples]ing Amazing! :D
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May 13, 2013
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